Peer Evaluation by Evrard:
You have used a good offer which makes your first tick correct and true, however you have not used any convincing words so that one is a cross. You have also not used any celebrity endorsement so that is also a cross and you have put a cross so that is good. You did put very positive words to make your product look better so this is correct. But again you did not put promises but that is fine because you did put a cross in that box. You put bossy verbs and you put a tick so this is correct, and you put a cross on the rhetorical question and it is correct because you did not put any questions. You used a picture that is very good so that makes a tick in that box. However you did not use any information on your product but you put a tick, so for me it should have been a cross because there is no information. but again you marked it correct as you did tell us where we can buy the product. in conclusion I think you did a very good advert but that you could have added more of the things in the box.
